So I just sat down for the past two hours to write my common place paper because mine absolutely sucked and I am well aware of it, because I literally did wait until the last second and threw around some random ideas. So for whoever had to read my paper in class the other day I am really sorry, it was HORRIBLE, and I am actually a pretty decent writer, I just have no clue what to do for this paper. I have so many thoughts and ideas but known of them can make an argument or persuade someone to do something about it. As you probably know my paper is about invisibility or whatever kind of stuff, just something along that line. I keep asking for help and everyone’s opinions really are helpful but I just cannot seem to put them together to actually write something. I do not know how you can argue about being invisible. I guess the only idea I can really come up with is what we could do to make people not feel this way? I don’t know, that seems kind of boring to me, I wouldn’t want to read something about that and since this kind of has to relate to our ARP there is nothing else I can really write about. I am really stressed out about this even though I know we can eventually revise it for a better grade but I would like to do my best on the first attempt. Once again sorry for my horrible first draft, hopefully with everyone’s help I will be able to write a paper that doesn’t make you fall asleep.
I remember blogging about this a few days ago when you put your first paragraph in. I thought it was an interesting idea, would you rather be invisible for real or go through feeling as though you were invisible because of how you are treated? I agree, it would be a hard paper to write. Maybe you haven't gotten to the bigger question yet. Maybe it has more to do with how we relate to others when we are uncomfortable, so we would rather be invisible. Maybe it is how we treat others when they seem different from us and we need to be mindful of how hurtful it is - they feel invisible. I hate when the idea isn't hitting me
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